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Fill Me

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Fill me, consume me, carry me away,
Hold me in your grasp until I never see the light of day. 
Take me far away; away from everyone I know
Take away their voices so my breath may finally slow.
Let your peaceful current calm this broken mind,
Let it carry away my thoughts to a place impossible to find.
Give me the silence that I crave each sleepless night,
Fill my ears, my body, my soul; just make everything alright. 

Fill this beating heart, so broken, hurt and scarred,
Stop it's painful beating; it's just become too hard. 
Was walking around Colorado today and saw a river, which inspired this
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GodoftheForgotten's avatar
dont think im enough of an expert to give critique so i'll drop a comment like everyone else-this piece of work reminds me of the past, makes me think of the future and consider the present. it makes me stop, think and read your every word carefully, trying to absorb your meaning and the emotion you're conveying though this verse